Score: 10

"This-is-your-masterpiece"

submission: -outpost theme-

date: December 6, 2004

Hi §Chain-S§!
Welcome to the Audio Portal..u r one of those few good music artist between all those lamers-faggots-gays-crappymusicmakers-stupid-motherf**kers audio portal users who make crap and want to become popular with their shit!
I'm always happy when a talented guy join us ^^
This song?! Yes..its cool..it's an goodbassdrived rave/techno tune (yeah i love this kind of stuff)
Keep up the good work!
P.S. Can i give u a hint?Don't upload too many songs in few time...u'll waste quickly your ideas =D
*ZB*
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=525830

Score: 10

"Almost perfect.."

submission: ParagonX9 - Defection

date: December 6, 2004

1st i want to list the weak points of this track..
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ok just 1...the synth @ 00.48...it's a too much simple sound i think u should change it with a more complex sinth...maybe ^^
Everything is cool and...awesome stuff Jermain..i loved the general song feeling at 00.22..COOL!
this is perfect for Stepmania..really =D ...i give u as always a fine "5"...will u vote also on my last submission b4 Wednesday Jermain?
Thx ^^
*ZB*

Score: 9

"Nice"

submission: Final Battle - last Version

date: November 25, 2004

U changed style in this one! ^^
Everything is nice..a downside in this one?! yes..maybe the drums man!
I think they're offkey ^^
I'll contact u soon 4 the remix project ok?!
Cya shadow ^^

Score: 10

"Omg professional stuff ^^"

submission: Whispers From the Past

date: November 23, 2004

Seriously Dreamscaper..you're wasting your time uploading songs on the Ng audio Portal!This place and the majority of his users SUX DonKey BaLLs LOL!
This is professional stuff,u could put it into a CD with 10 or 11 other sweet tracks by your musical genie (its true =D) and get a contract with a label ^_^
If u want i'll help u working on some tracks and...ehi..why don't we make a collab CD? its a pretty idea, f**king hard to realize but..we can make together a 12 tracks CD..6 by u and 6 by me! Any musical genre allowed ^^

What do u think?!
yeh..i'm a dreamer but i dunno why,my friend,i can feel that u are a dreamer too ^^
k stop dreaming 4 now lets review this stuff!
Diversity:10 u r the king of climax (climaxes is the plural?! lol my english sux!)
6 minutes of cool progressive trance
Clarity:10 perfect samples quality! (9 is for the low bitrate)
Effort:10 I know how is hard to make something like this ^^

Cya Byron!

Score: 10

"A lot of work on this one!"

submission: Zero Gravity in Dreamscape

date: November 1, 2004

Omfg!An amazing remix of the sweetest Dark Dnb track on Newgrounds!
I really liked how u reproduced by yourself the "Amen" break which Paragon used in the original!
Awesome work DreamScaper!

Score: 9

"Almost perfect this time =D"

submission: Evil Awakes (Battle ReMix) 1.2

date: October 27, 2004

The piano now sounds better!
Can i give u a hint?!
At the beginning use another instrument!I dunno...a cool synth..a synthetic reverbered bass...something cool ^_^
When at 1.57 that wicked melody comes in again u can use your piano beacause here for some stylish reason it sounds f**ing cool!
Btw this song has a lot of potential...if u want i will make a little cover/remix ;-) (contact me)

Score: 8

"Good! 8/10"

submission: Evil Awakes (Battle ReMix)

date: October 17, 2004

a good song by shadow...lets see...^_^
When i heard the piano i though this will be a crappy midi rip-off but fortunately the rest of the song kicked ass!
9/10 the drums - Cool work man!
9/10 strings
7/10 the synth part - maybe 2 loud
1/10 the piano - sry shadow but it sucked donkey balls LOL!
Good JoB! I'm waiting 4 more stuff

Plz don't use that piano again...NEVER! :-)

Score: 9

"9 for u my friend"

submission: In Bizznizz

date: October 6, 2004

Beautiful...i love the smooth atmosphere
I can imagine an epic battle on the top of a dark castle ^_^
the synth is perf4ct - cOOl and warm
great work man ;-)

yeah there is a downside...the drums :-(
maybe u used too common Fl samples...Mmmmmm...check out your e-mail Hypo I've sent u a lil gift lol!
(if u got it answer me ^_^ )

Score: 9

"This is great man!"

submission: Problems With Self Expression?

date: October 3, 2004

Ok man first let me say that this track is f*CKING cOOl!
Lets begin to review Inepty...
-Originality:9
Nothing to say here,it could be a 10 but u used the always cool but too popular between DnB artists 4 notes background Rob D's "Clubbed to Death" style!
-Diversity:10
many variations and tons of drum loops ^_^
-Clarity:9 Everything is nice man,ah...yeah,the vocal sample hurted my ears for no evident reason :-(
-Effort:9 Yeah,like Paragon said u used drum loops...but i don't care 'bout it ^_^
If something is cool is cool!
(ehi Inepty i need an info...what's the name of the drum loops which join the melody at 00.50 sec?)

Score: 9

"Score raised ^_^"

submission: ParagonX9 - Neutralized

date: September 28, 2004

3.33 to 3.75 I hope my vote will help this submission 2 be in the weekly chart!(update is tomorrow)
First of all i want to ask u ,Jermain, to check out my last submission:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=525830&sub=1433
7

Its a little tribute to your kick-ass music and my first DnB song ever =) (if u can plz vote cause the usual gays has voted 2 zero's on it and I'm trying to save it for the update of tomorrow!)
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Now let's review!
well,it's a-m-a-z-i-n-g!
Do u know what does it reminds me? The Battle themes of the "Tales of..." games ^_^
-the synth and bass are 2 cool
-your live drums are great
everything is great...a downside?...yeah...the ending maybe...
Nice job man!